strong feelings about the state of magical education in New Zealand. The latter is entirely irrelevent to the main plot
Wouldn't it solve your plot-irrelevance problem if she had strong opinions about Corsican bandits instead?
I am looking forward to making the acquaintance of fantasy!Bunter.
It is easier to write short excerpts of almost anything
This really ought to be a truth universally acknowledged (along with the one about a young woman with a good salary necessarily being in want of a house).
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Date: 2011-01-27 01:24 pm (UTC)Wouldn't it solve your plot-irrelevance problem if she had strong opinions about Corsican bandits instead?
I am looking forward to making the acquaintance of fantasy!Bunter.
It is easier to write short excerpts of almost anything
This really ought to be a truth universally acknowledged (along with the one about a young woman with a good salary necessarily being in want of a house).