and not several chapters where the same damn things happens over and over again And that you solve by showing only the last 5 seconds and making it dream sequence. And you could blur Dian/Bredon/Harlequin's POV, and make some of it really creepy; I think it could be great fun. Never happen, of course.
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And that you solve by showing only the last 5 seconds and making it dream sequence. And you could blur Dian/Bredon/Harlequin's POV, and make some of it really creepy; I think it could be great fun. Never happen, of course.