organic [...] stodgy and inedible and smells of parsnips
LOL! never mind, at least you can feel good about saving the world. Smelling of parsnips is a small price to pay for a fic full of moral fibre.
That series of questions is very helpful. I tried it out and discovered that (a) I have some gaping plot holes - well, not so much plot holes, actually, as sections towards the end where I simply have no idea how LPW gets the information he needs, and (b) it's all a bit simplistic. Things get tidied up awfully fast. I think I might try plotting out the detecting process as a tree diagram with branching nodes (it ought to be doable as a flow chart, but I don't think I'm quite up to that, not unless I had a really ginormous piece o paper).
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LOL! never mind, at least you can feel good about saving the world. Smelling of parsnips is a small price to pay for a fic full of moral fibre.
That series of questions is very helpful. I tried it out and discovered that (a) I have some gaping plot holes - well, not so much plot holes, actually, as sections towards the end where I simply have no idea how LPW gets the information he needs, and (b) it's all a bit simplistic. Things get tidied up awfully fast. I think I might try plotting out the detecting process as a tree diagram with branching nodes (it ought to be doable as a flow chart, but I don't think I'm quite up to that, not unless I had a really ginormous piece o paper).